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Nova, Amii, Rina and Seron

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I was going to make a front page for the portfolio but I got sidetracked at making another shiny page instead. It seems unfinished but I like it. The shiny green and stuff makes an impact with the black background.

Basically this was to test my front and back views. I haven't done a full-on front view for a while.

I like the progress. There are already five full pages and more to come.
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I will address everything...I'm in "nit-picky art critic mode" here XD.

Corner person could use some orange and blue highlights on the body similar to how you did with Nova (that's something I like that you do, but keep doing it.)

Person behind Nova: Is that light coming from here eye? If so,make the hair darker, since it's over that light source (but I wont suggest you do that here, because the hair covers it all entirely, so doing that wont look as good)So keep this in mind when you have like some strands of hair (but less than now) coming down like that.

Unless you're going for a "0_0" or :omg: emotional look, I suggest you not to draw the whole iris.

Resources, use like pictures for anatomy and stuff (yeah I'm still on the whole eye thing XD)

I do like those light ray things though..they're cool looking.